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Review by ~Minja~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Mari McKee
It's been a pleasure to review your "Invalid Item"  on behalf of "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 
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I'm working on the challenge in "a very Wodehouse challenge"  and one of the tasks I'm given to is sending reviews for this round's entries in "Invalid Item"  contest. I've noticed that your sub type is poetry but you have short story instead. Not something that really matters but I thought to mention it to you. I love the names of your egg yolks that you used here. This story is really dramatic with hilarious content. I like your approach to the image prompt, you manged to describe so much within only 500 words. I like the atmosphere in this restaurant even though it's not really recommended place where you can get nice breakfast. Clumsy waitress totally added up laugh to this story even though I was a bit sad at the end when Gladys and Earl finished in the garbage bin. I thought they will be given to the other costumer or something, since the restaurant doesn't seem so clean *Bigsmile*. Great story overall. I don't have suggestions on this. Thanks you for sharing your writing with me. All smiles..*Smile*.



~Minja~
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