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I found this item under Static items, genre Fiction, on the Browse by type tab. I was also looking for something spirited, for the season, and your Title pulled me in, to read this item. It is a micro-fiction, as it tells a story in only 73 words. That is not an easy task, but the prompt and the words "blink," made me understand the reason to be succinct, here. Nicely crafted story which builds the scene of someplace out in the woods with a witch-type person and a bundle of bones. A woman must choose a bone and throw it on the fire. I enjoyed the ending, I presume the two of them will be joined at the rib, now. A true sign of love and destiny according to the bone reader's prediction. I was quite entertained by this quick read, and loved the huge images that formed in my head when I read this. I see no room for changes anywhere as it was perfect the way it was penned. A quick and mysterious read, with a good bit of spice that accompanies this Gothic write for the Halloween spirit, and offers such enjoyment to the readers at this time of year. Well done! Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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