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 Jackson  [13+]
A story about man's best friend.
by Gedankenexperiment
Review of Jackson  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how Jackson knew which way to go and he guided the family to safety. It made me wonder why Mr. Davis had so much control over the family's comings and goings. This sounds like an unusual arrangement, to say the least.

When you say Proclamation, I am wondering what that is. Is it the Emancipation Proclamation or a fictional sort of thing?

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I like to read that Jackson's offspring is carrying on the tradition of looking out for the loved ones. A loyal pup can be a godsend in so many ways. Jackson the frisky younger still has a family thanks to his father.

That sounds like a very good thing to me.

Nice work!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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