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 | My Brother, My Sister  [E] This poem is an ode to being the oldest and having siblings that are much younger  |
| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC Olivia! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   What a great theme for a poem. People with siblings can easily identify with your mixed reactions to your brother and sister..and any body really as we are all combinations of personal traits as we develop. I loved the last line as I think we take on similar qualities from family and as we grow and become aware of being even more than the labels or mimicries we learn from home.  I like the free flow style for this content and the way it lays on the page as you contrast the qualities you see in each sibling.  I notice a typo near the end in the word "thaem">them. I wanted to drop the word "people" as the meaning of individuals covers it. I appreciate your awareness and ability to see this in your family and in yourself. I am the eldest of 6 so I totally get how being the "responsible" one had me taking on a role of caretaking, hoping the younger ones will turn out ok and/or wish they would follow the rules as I did. LOL Thanks for sharing your experience and vision that took me on a trip back in memory lane.   a heartfelt tribute!Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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