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 chocolate goodness  []
I love chocolate don't you so I was thinken bout it and said lets write about it
by potwet
Review by Angus
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Rated: | (4.0)
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Hi there, Potwet, and happy 4th 'birthday' on WdC!
I peeked through your portfolio and noticed that your pieces aren't very long, so there's not a lot I can review about them, other than this one is 'sweet'! *Laugh*
But I also read your port intro and saw how much you want to do (and are doing) for The Children's Hospital, and that's very impressive. The world needs more people like you, especially during this time of year!
OK. As for this piece, it's not bad, just a little short, and it's obvious you have a sweet tooth! Just be sure to brush!
I also see that you're 4 years older now, so I hope you haven't lost that 'giving' sense you once had!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Potwet, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!


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