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Given: Dec 6, 2016 at 6:05pm
Length: 352 Characters |
344 w/o WritingML
I loved your poem. lol You gave me good imagery on the Santa in shorts etc. lol I did wonder how Santa would lose the 'love handles. You rhymed it well. That was very creative!
The last verse- Seemed and beam...beam just made me cringe, too predictable? The rest was just delightful.
Thanks for sharing
Merry Christmas
Love, LinnAnn
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You responded to this review 12/07/2016 @ 6:54pm EST