Flash fiction can be difficult to write, but I think you have done really well with this piece. Although there is little time to create the character and have the reader care about that character, I think you have done a fairly good job with that. It was a bit confusing at first - but that could have been 100% me.
Overall, I think you did an excellent job in very few words. It is difficult to convey a story in less than 300 words, and you gave the reader a great snapshot into the world of these two people, leaving us with all of the right questions: Who is he? Who is Arianna to him? Why was she stuck there? Oooohhh. All great stuff!
Thanks for sharing this piece with us.
Write on!
Beck

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