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 Pride and Playfulness  [E]
A poem inspired by getting my butt kicked in bowling (I bowl twice a week in league).
by Tim Chiu
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This is a nice poem about pride and playfulness. The poem offers an explanation about the pride in the game being played. The feeling of pride is developed with the game. This introduces us to the concept of being joyful about the game we play. The shove makes him wonder about his pride. The pride is too precious to lose. A person comes along and tells us we are wrong. This makes our pride suffer. The poetry has much meaning and sense.

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