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Secrets in the Walls  [13+]
A story about love, evil, and taking over a kingdom...
by Professor Q
Review by Soulraider
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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This is a nice story with a lot of imagination in play. It reminds of fantasy fiction episode. The characters are described well and make us connect to them. There are a lot of spelling mistakes in the text, which have to be corrected. The story is long winding and can be of shorter length to make it more interesting and involving. The reader might lose connection reading so many pieces.

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