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Hello there, kim_mc
This is a Simply Positive Review! *TulipR*

*Vine2* I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the Random Review, click.

*Ghost* I was slightly haunted by the words in this poem. Not because there was anything scary about it, quite the opposite. You made me think about my own mother, and how much I've missed talking to her since she passed. Yet, she still speaks to me in my mind when I do something she would do, or cook one of her dishes -- it's like she guides me through in her sweet, gentle way.

Here, the daughter is lost, either by some roadblock in her life's path, or another conflict that keeps her mother's voice where she can hear it but not see her.

*ButtonPause* I loved the ending where the mother tells her in essence that she will always be there for her, but as soon as she is able to see what needs to be done on her own, she will no longer "hear" her mother. Does that mean she will "see" her? I doubt it. I think it's just a way to let her know she was never alone, and must never give up.

*FishO* However, this is quite a subjective view on my part, as I place my own memories of my mother within my opinion.

*ShirtG* Nicely done.And as I mentioned, hauntingly pulling.



Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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