Hello!

I saw this in the review request thread and thought that I would stop by to give my thoughts.

Overall I thought that this was an interesting topic for an article, but since you're looking for help grammatically I thought I would point out just a couple quick things that I noticed:



Since this is a question it should end with a question mark.



Small typo here, it should be "we indirectly speak of research."


The other suggestion that I have for you would be to either indent the paragraphs or add lines of space between them. It's something that looks a little more professional and in my experience, it makes it a lot easier to get people to read all the way through and leave feedback.

Although I think the piece, overall, could use a tiny bit of polishing, I also liked it. You chose an interesting topic and went about it from a logical standpoint - which is something I can really appreciate.

I wish you all the best in getting the editing help and feedback you're looking for with this piece.

Sincerely,


-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .