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The Puffy Ink'd Unicorn  [E]
“Please, use your words to set me free!” A Pink Fluffy Unicorn Contest Entry
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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An Unusual Suspect of The Bovine Kind



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am reading in the Fluffy Unicorn Archives! Congratulations on your achievement!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like the message here to never give up. We all struggle with what to write, but you have captured the frustration of that quite well.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part because I could identify strongly with the emotions expressed here:

"I could not stand it anymore.
“You will not mock me!” thus I swore.
Pen in hand, I scrawled some doodles
which looked like a nest of noodles."

No matter how much I moo about not mocking me, the mocking persists.

Fine work - your rhyme flows very well and all the words seem to me to be well chosen. Bravo!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am certainly not an editor or proof reader, heaven forbid! I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I look at a review as my reaction to what I have read and a sharing of what I bring to the table on any given day. Sometimes I don't bring much, but I enjoy my reading adventures either way.

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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