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Christhesourpatchkid

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I found this item by clicking on the Community tab on the left of the screen and selected Read a Newbie. This was one of the items on the page, and the title lured me in.

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A vivid piece that captures the emotions as one person is tragically taken away. The bond between Rachel and Lucas was severed and Lucas can not hide what this does to him. Though he tries to conceal his feelings, they escape as the devastation washes over him.

For me, the ending of this short piece read as if the opening lines of a poem or a song, and I can't get them out of my mind. This is truly a piece of imagery that captures humor emotion in such a crucial point that the oceans of tears fall forth.

This short story is set up from the start as it takes you on a roller coaster of emotion. You see the transition right away and that releases the torrent as soon as Amber utters that dreadful phrase. Amber is a key person in this piece as she is the one who delivers the tragic news.

Overall a wonderful piece that I enjoyed reading, though it did tug at the heart strings and brought tears to the eyes.





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