Hello!

I saw this in the review request thread and just thought that I would drop by to, well, review it.

This was really touching and I can definitely see why it won the ribbon. I feel really bad that you and your sister are estranged - I know how much something like that can hurt, but I think it's incredible that you were able to turn the pain from that experience into something so beautiful.

This poem obviously has a lot to say, and I think you did a great job portraying the situation and the powerful emotions behind it. I hope that writing this helped sort through some stuff and take the sting out of it, and more than that I hope that one day you and your sister are able to patch things up.

In the meantime, thank you so much for sharing your work here on WdC. It's clear that you have a lot of poetic talent (to an untrained eye like mine at least) and I hope that you keep writing and posting.

Sincerely,



-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .