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My Papa Gave Us Tulips   [E]
Haiku Sonnet Poem 1st Place Verdant Poetry Contest, March 2017
by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, ♥Hooves♥
This is a Simply Positive Review! *PawPrints*


*SuitSpade* I found this little beauty, while perusing the Poetry Genre page.

*TulipR* What a find this is! My heart burst with so many emotions. I love the pictures forming in my mind of a field or garden, filled with the gorgeous colors of tulips. It also make me a little sad, for I will be returning North later this year, and will miss seeing my own blooms.

*TulipB* However, your lovely Haiku string, with a taste of a lyrical sonnet woven in, made me live the moment of the tulips proud blooms of spring. It is well deserving of the lovely ribbon adorning it!

*TulipO* There was also the heartache of knowing that the tulips were a reminder of the dad who had left them behind for his children to enjoy. It is a bittersweet time of year because it reminds the daughter that her dad has passed away, yet she will always have him in her memory each time a tulip blooms. It is his spirit dancing freely, each spring, even if for only a short time.

*TulipY* I couldn't think of anything to add to this poem. It is perfection as is, and leaves me with such warm and colorful images that will carry me through my own missing of the tulips blooming in my garden.

Lovely! *TulipB**TulipV**TulipY*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
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