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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I gave the prompt that this was written for in The Writer's Cramp, earlier in the week. I was not the judge, but I like to come and read the writing that is inspired by my prompts, if I have a chance. I am always amazed at what you writers do with my prompts.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is about living life in a way that life would teach us to do. Life is hard and it beats us up at times. We all have these times when we are passive observers to our own lives. We may want to take charge, but again and again, life comes along and smacks us down in discouragement.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part of your poem:

"Carpe diem they yell at me.
Me, hidden under the covers.
No new day shall find me unafraid.
This fear forever above me hovers."

I think it is really brave to stand alone for something you believe in. You stand alone and take charge - that's being very courageous. Not that many people can truthfully say they stood up to much in life. It is all herd mentality and go along to get along.

Fine poem! Well done!

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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