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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Vine1*
This is a Simply Positive Review!


*MugP* I am also reviewing your item because it popped-up on the Random Review generator.

*FlagG* What a lovely picture you paint within your verses. Yes, nature does bring us a feast to behold before our eyes. I recently went on a bike riding trip on a dirt road, and found the most glorious flower. I had never seen this particular bloom before. There was also a fruit blooming on the vine below it. When I finally made my way back home and looked it up online, I found out it was a Passion Flower, and passion fruit.

*FlowerV* The flower got its name because its center reminded people in the tropics of Jesus, in the Passion of Christ. Very interesting!

*TulipP* Your poem made me think of all that is beautiful and that indeed, all of the beauty of nature is God's masterpiece for us to enjoy.

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*Peacock* The poem flowed melodiously, for the most part. If I could suggest one thing, it would be to find another word for "wonder." You use wonderland, wondrous and wonderment. Perhaps: marvelous, miraculous, amazing, astonishment, could be used.

Example: "There were scenes of wonderment"
TRY: Astonishing scenes abound

*Penw* Just a quick suggestion, you could come up with something much better, I'm sure.

Lovely and very spiritual! *ScallopY*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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