First Thoughts: This is a funny bickering dialogue between a father that enjoys older ways of reading news via newspaper and son who prefers a more technological way of finding news. I can relate to both because I prefer the hand held news, but can easily learn of news by tv or searching the internet too. Tv and internet may be faster but Dad sure does like the paper.

Suggestions: I didn't notice any errors and have no suggestions on ways to improve the item. The writing flowed nicely and it kept my attention the entire time.

Final Thoughts: Even if he finds the news out a bit later, Dad sure likes the enjoyment he gets from the paper even if the ink does dirty up his hands a bit. Jimmy seems like he relys on the internet and tv a bit more possibly because it's a faster form and at times it seems like what is printed in the newspaper is already old news nowadays. Both Jimmy and Dad appear to have great relationship and like to tease and get on each others nerves.

Keep up the great writing!


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