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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You were highly recommended to me by a writer named THANKFUL SONALI Now What? so here I am to read and send a review.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I love your title. It engaged me immediately because at times as a young person, I had a place, a place with a swing where I went to feel better about things. It was a park that I went to and I haven't thought about it in a long time. This brought it all back in a good way. It was a comforting place for a number of reasons.

I think it is important that we let ourselves imagine what could be and how things could change. When we put our mind to dreaming of scenarios it is a lovely exercise.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part, along with your ending:

"She was overwhelmed, by the feeling of comfort and the feeling like she was at home, for the first time in her life."

Sometimes on here, even after all this time of being here, I find that I feel as if I do not belong. Then, something usually happens that makes things fall into place. Sometimes it takes a long time (or seems like it) for that to happen.

What I read from your story is that it is important never to give up hope of finding that magic to put in your life. Never let anyone tell you different. Hold on to your dreams and your individuality. That is the message here and it's an important one.

Well done!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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