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 An Unknown Past  [18+]
A SpaceStorm uncovered the ruins. But it hasn't explained why it did it, yet.
by PureSciFi
Review of An Unknown Past  
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Excellent take on the photo prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
Chavic was the perfect character for this story, I enjoyed the journey he went through.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
The story as a whole was a smooth read. I thought the history of the spacestorms were interesting as well. I found myself wanting to read more, especially about the world of the past. Well done.!


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