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 The People of Mars  [13+]
Why take an archeologist into space?
by Chris24
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Excellent story and perfect use of the photo prompt

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
Dr. Branson was the perfect character for this story. Amelia was an excellent character to play off Dr.Branson for this story, it was fun to read their interactions together.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I really enjoyed this story and the way things played out. The ending was surprising and made me chuckle a lot. The use of the prompt was used perfectly, and the overall dialog kept me reading. Well done.


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