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The Day After  [E]
Santa and his team vs. the elves
by Genipher
Review of The Day After  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hooves posing with Peeker, in Ireland to greet New Years past and present.



What brought HOOves to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp. Thanks for entering! *Delight*

I am reading and reviewing your item at 10:00 AM WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

What does HOOves think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I love the idea of a little competition the day after the big delivery day. The banter between the elves and Santa's team was very entertaining and seemed real. Loved the hard feelings brewing over the loss last year.

What does HOOves Moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I loved the reindeers' reactions to the taunts and Rudolph's upon being left out.

Santa has his hands full this year and next. I enjoyed this very much even though I was rooting for the losing team.

Very creative and entertaining story!

*Thumbsup*

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp. Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

4ps a.k.a. HOOves sometimes tHiNg

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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