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 The Verdict  [E]
Decisions can be hard to make
by Myles Abroad
Review of The Verdict  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought HOOves to meander and glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Balloonr*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering! *Delight*

I am reading and reviewing your item at 11:04AM WDC time, and storing it in my review tool for later delivery, after the contest winners are announced. As per the contest rules, no subsequent revisions or edits were considered in writing this review.

What does HOOves think about and contemplate while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is a tale of adventure and trust. Sanya must decide whether to leave the only world she has ever known, to go out in the Wild with her trusted teacher and mentor, Jan.

Jan has learned information through observation, but it is clear that their relationship involves trust. Still, it leads Sanya to question all the truth she has ever known.

One thing to mention is that you didn't bold the first and last lines (the prompt lines) as required by Sophie in the rules. You might want to remember that for future entries.

What does HOOves applaud and moo about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I liked how you developed your character of Sanya and how carefully she weighed the facts leading to her decision. It was a very effective move to start and end the story with the decision to leave and spend the rest of it showing the reader how the decision was made and what considerations were present.

I enjoyed reading your story very much - I thought it was very creative and original and well told.

Nice work!

The Writer's Cramp is a great way to meet other writers (by reviewing their entries) and to get your work read. Also, many Newsletter items featured and Quill entries have originated from experienced writers who regularly read in "The Writer's Cramp" . Whether you win or not on a particular day, rest assured that your item will be read by those on this site who enjoy reading for its own sake.

4ps a.k.a. HOOves, sometimes tHiNg

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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