Hello Dorianna



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Great poem. It has a good flow to it. The title works well with the poem. I can see a new person emerging with the words you have chosen to use.

As a proud individual who is not
Unseen like a ghost.
The shell I lived in was left
At the corner of lies and despair
These lines have great imagery.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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