Hello Solace.Bring



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

The title works for this poem, but it doesn't pop for attention. Maybe Curtain Call. Then again I could be wrong, it is your poem. I like to use a line from the poem as my title.

I kicked
The seat of
The person
Before me

Using punctuation helps the flow and rhythm of the poem so does not capitalizing every line.
I kicked,
the seat of,
the person,
before me.

Roadmaps to Gypsies
I like this phrase. It has depth.

I swear
I would omit this line. It destracts from the poem and interrupts the flow of thought.

I hope I have given some help. Take away from this review what helps. If none is helpful then that is the way it is.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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