Hello Amelia



Welcome to WDC.

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Good title. It grabs the reader and pulls them in. There is good rhythm and flow to your poem. Lots of emotion pour through your words. There is depth and power within this piece. Nice word selection.

Nightmares fill my dreams.
Good imagery, I can relate to this line very well.

Fear gripped my heart;
Cold claws digging in.
Hopelessness and darkness
Making homes within.
Again good imagery and emotion. Makes me shiver.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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