Hello sfttarget



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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest


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Frankenstein is one of my favorites stories. I feel you captured the story quiet well. You have created good imagery with your words. I could see the story unfold. The rhythm is good. And each line flows nicely into the next. And you kept with a rhyme scheme.

My only suggestion is that the word "kill" has been way over used. If you need that many "kill's" in your poem try finding other words that mean the same.

I feel this piece is well written.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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