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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

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An interesting poem. I like the title. It works well with this poem. It is also catchy puling the reader in. It has good rhythm and flows nicely. Good word selection.

You don't have to capitalize every line of the poem. Especially the lines that doesn't follow a period.

I feel this piece is well written.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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