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Writing The Script . . .  [E]
My entry for the 2012 Official WDC "Dear Me" Contest.
by ruwth
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Writing The Script I needed to fine out what the script was and how you wrote it or what inspired you to write.
Description:
My entry for the 2012 Official WDC "Dear Me" Contest. I after finding out this was a "dear Me" contest entry, decided that this could be interesting and have some gems.
         *Bell* FIRST IMPRESSIONS *Bell*

         *ThumbsUp* I LIKE *ThumbsUp*
What and why:
ok, i'm in! You have inspired me to take advantage of some of your advice to you, see, you added gems to my life as well as to your life, great job, much thanks. I appreciate the reminders about living life with God, family, friends, and enjoying the very precious days we have been gifted. Yes, I am in total agreement that, writing is also a precious gift given to us for sharing our word art which contains many gems and jewels for readers to partake and enjoy. I like very much that you expressed your love for God and your need to have a relationship with Him.

plot:
For me this letter has a wonderful and very encouraging plot for your journey through life as well as for other people on their journey through life. I'm full of heart felt joy because you shared you and your thoughts and desires with readers, much thanks.

Rhythm:
Your word art was of a very smooth reading experience which for me was like riding along a nice rural path on air as I viewed the scenery.

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         *Question* QUESTION(S) *Question*
It seems that this writing was much inspired by or through divine intervention, true?

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My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
My only comment for something to consider is that the font was ok to read for me, however there may be people who have vision limitations that would have a difficult time reading your wonderful letter. If I had written this letter and presented it exactly as you decided to do, I would also make a black font on while background available under the original, food for thought. *Smile*

*Thought* CONCLUSION(S) *Thought*


My thoughts and Impressions:
It was wonderful to read about your aspirations for the next year(s) ahead. I thank you for sharing these because I also have been inspired to make beneficial life changes. Your words jumped off the page at me in a nice uplifting manner.

Write and share if you dare, for readers everywhere. *Smile*
Safe travels and many blessings.

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