First Impression: This is a sweet tribute for a heartfelt friendship. I like how you penned it down.
The poem: You wrote beautifully what friendship truly mean.
Friends makes us laugh, and we can share our thoughts with them. Life becomes dusty bleak desert without friends. I found those words reflected in your poem. The way you wrote can easily read. I like the images you have painted here.
Favorite parts :
“All the days I spent with you,
these things I can't explain,
the only thing I want:
For us to stay the same."
Ovarall: Friendship is a good subject for poetry. I understood this was written from personal experience and it looks great. I like the thought woven in this piece. Thank you for sharing.
Mina
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