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 Fumbling Down the Path  [E]
Trying to get my feet back under me
by Pamela Sue Bishop
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Title:
Fumbling Down The Path
Life is a challenge and how we meet this challenge makes all the difference.
Description:
Trying to get my feet back under me
I can relate have had time when I needed to do the something.
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What and why:
The deepness of feeling about not just yourself but also someone else. Although it is about life falling apart for you and this other person, it is also about holding onto the future with hope and strength.

plot:
This is as close to real life as it can get. Having life exposed for all toes, is quite a challenging even to handle and you had to have fortitude and strength to manage to find your way to the future.

Rhythm:
As I read your word art, it for me flowed nicely and smoothly. The words worked together to play a tune of balance and were well tuned.

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My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
Keep the faith and don't quit, you can do this.

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My thoughts and Impressions:
Reading your poem shows resilience and determination to over come and excel at fumbling down the path of life. I hope all is going well. Thank you for sharing this very close and personal life experience with readers/me.

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