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 Legend of the Goat Lady  [E]
A short story describing an event that led to the nickname of "Goat Lady."
by Andie
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Andie , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Legend of the Goat Lady for "Invalid Item.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Martha Allison's age. The description are part of the action and move the narrative forward at a good pace. The action kept my attention.

What I like: I like the description of the billy goat's confrontation with the store owner. I like Martha Allison because she showed the calmness and fortitude of a strong woman.

Suggestions: My only suggestion is, if you have more stories about this woman write them.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this wonderful story because of the way Martha dealt with the goat. Write on.

Prosperous Snow WDC Power Review



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