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 Perfect Dogs  [E]
When animals are resurrected, will they change and be given new bodies, too?
by K. Ray
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I busted up laughing as well. I do recall a talk on Joseph Smith saying animals will be resurrected as well as humans. Which I am happy about. I fully expect all of my dogs to find me when I cross over. lol

His views and beliefs should have been in line with yours, unless that is part of the joke of the story.

Must have been serious if he put his food down to talk. After all, he is a man. (giggle)

I like how you set the stage, setting and telling us it's lunch without being overt about it. Good job.

You might want to let non members know who Joseph Smith is: An historical leader in example.
That would give a bit of understanding as to the power of his statement.

Great Anecdote. Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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