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 | Or is there room for me?  [E] Silent love  |
| (4.0)| Hi! It's been a pleasure to review your story "Or is there room for me?" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you. It is a beautiful poem shows the confusion fear with love. Your poem has lovely romantic thought inside every line. Yes, Love is confusing. I like the way you put your feelings into words. Our mind is a wondrous place , so many things happening here. I like and appreciate this poem because it shows how we feel when we in love. Suggestion: I found that that some of your lines are too long for example “Though you do not know the depth of how I truly feel, it still warms my heart & soul to know you’re there.” It would be an wonderful poem if you make some lines shorter. I like the words of your poem. My favorite lines are “I look at you & see an amazing glow, but then I realize who you are. Constantly clouding & sojourning in my mindless dreams.” I understood this was written from personal experience and it looks great. I like the thought woven in this piece.   Mina   ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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