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 |  | Ghost Dog  [E] His loving spirit still haunts me. A Pet News Contest Entry  |
| (5.0)| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS   I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Ghost Dog Did you write "DOG!" I've got to review this! Description: His loving spirit still haunts me. A Pet News Contest Entry Spirit This tells me it's about a dog who is no longer on this earth.   FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: The way the words and structure create a bouncy reading experience kept me interested in reading. Love and respect for the dog from you and for you from the dog seem to be underlying in this poem. Scooter seemed to be a very nice dog who had a lot of energy and a sense of adventure. plot: Scooter and you together sharing life doing dog and people things makes for a nice story in poetry form. Rhythm: The rhythm was for me a jolly, happy, and bouncy which seemed to match well the personality and energy of Scooter. Character(s) The relationship between you and Scoter and scooters personality in the ix made this scene of the two of you going through life together believable and realistic. You and Scooter seemed to be a good match for each other.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: This poem brought great sadness to me because just recently my Dog Ammo who just turned a year old 4/7/19 disappeared 4/5/19 and I have had no news about him since his disappearance.  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Thank you for sharing your word art with me, readers,, and reviewers. Much thanks for the opportunity to review for you. Safe travels and many blessing.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/22/2018 @ 10:48pm EDT