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 A Letter to Mankind  [E]
A letter from our mother to each and every one of us, sent with nothing but love.
by Abdullah X
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!Abdullah

It's been a pleasure to review your story "A Letter to Mankind"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story I like the concept. You wrote it from the view of our mother nature. I like this thoughtful piece.

*BurstP* THE STORY: Your visuals gave life to our mother nature.

Earth is a place to live. There is no other planet like our mother earth. The earth gives us food, shelter, everything we need to survive. She provides us everything need for free, like mothers do for children. Earth is indeed a mother to all but we don't pay the respect that she deserves.

You described beautifully what problems our mother earth faces today.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake.

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