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 The Wrongful Accusation of Video Games  [E]
Essay about video games and its controversial impact on people
by Ahmed Usman
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!Usman

It's been a pleasure to review your story "The Wrongful Accusation of Video Games"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This is good piece of work about positive and negative side of video game. I liked the concept. I like the descriptions and presentations. The way you wrote this piece keeps me reading it to the end. Your points are very true and to the point. Yes, video games is an addiction. It causes health problem.

I remember when I was high school I spent all of my free time playing video games. It was really fun. But too much of anything is bad.

I learned that some video game like Blue Whale can kill people. Your article helps the reader’s.

In conclusion, I think you wrote a good article with a good message. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.


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