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| THIS REVIEW IS JUST FOR YOU. SAFE TRAVELS & MANY BLESSINGS    I am reviewing your work as a "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" family member, on behalf of The WDC Army Angels  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: The Guide This title didn't reveal much about what was to come, however I noticed it enough to wonder about this title. Then I investigated the description which convinced me to read your word art. Description: One man's life guided so many others. How did this happen so naturally? My first thought was who was this and what natural event happened? This was enough for me to decide to read your writing.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: The pastor seemed to be a nice and willing person to lead his flock, however it seems that there was something lacking until he realized the importance of people being together, helping each other, and giving support. The best part of this story is when the pastor decided to spend time with nature and as he was accompanied by the church congregation, he spent time with them offering friendship and whatever help would be to their benefit. plot: The person who show the way toward fellowship and helping each other sparked a movement of the pastor and congregation to join together in nature and help each other. This is a great way to encourage people to share activities and life together as they go through their days and nights. Spending time in and with nature can be a flaming and relaxing activity and a good way to reach out to each other. This story clearly shows how one person can make a very huge beneficial difference in peoples lives. Rhythm: Reading your word art was easy, smooth, and brought me into the events and lives of the characters. I felt neither rushed nor restrained. The story moved along at a nice pace keeping me involved with the characters and actions. Character(s) All of the characters were believable and seemed to be people I could relate to and understand. For me it would have been nice to know more about the guide who was well missed and so well respected. Structure Peoples reactions to their loss was interesting because of all the messages being word for word the same. The preacher although a kind and caring person seemed to be doing all he could, yet there seemed to be something missing. This peaked my curiosity. The guide who was dead seemed to be in a way a bit of a mystery. The congregation seemed to be going through the motions of church going, yet this one man had touched their lives in a special and unique way bringing them closely together at the funeral. After the speech by the creature everyone had a greater understanding of friendship, togetherness, and helping and sharing each others burdens and successes. These scenes kept me interested and inside the story. The scenes worked well and were in order. The build up to the end was well executed.  OBSERVATION(S)  QUESTION(S)  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: The GuideThis story is for me of great importance. I would strongly recommend that more be added to this title so that your story is not over looked. Nature and one mans life guiding many others made me want to know more. The wanting to know more is why readers investigate/read word art.  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: For me this story showed how one person can make a difference and how if we stick together and work together there is great success and happiness abounding in our midst. The results of these events show that because of one person many lives were changed for the better. Changing lives for the better is a wonderful message presented through your word art. Much thanks for taking the time to write and share this story with me, readers, reviewers, and perhaps a publisher. Safe travels and many blessings.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/26/2018 @ 3:22pm EDT