Hello Latcherous



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Welcome to WDC.

Starting with the title, it pulls in the reader. And I feel it works okay with the poem. I feel it is a little misleading. I see the studying, but I don't see anything about the soul.

The rhythm is good and moves the story line at a good pace. You have captured emotions of what is could be like before an exam. The first three stanzas are the best. I'm not for sure about the last one, I think maybe too many I'll. And it slows down the rhythm.

A few grammar issues and by adding punctuation you help the flow and rhythm of the poem. When you use a contraction you need to add in the apostrophe . . . didn't, isn't. And also capitalize the I's. With a little tweaking this poem could rock.

Remember you are the creator here, these are just my opinions nothing more.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .