Hello Mina



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Good title, it's catchy makes me wonder what kind of storm. I live in Oklahoma and we can get some bad ones.

There is a lot of good imagery. I could see the damage caused by the storm as I read. The rhythm flows good and moves the story line along at a good pace. Good word selection.

There is also beauty in this piece to me because I love thunderstorms. They are so calming, listening to the thunder and watching the lightening flash is pretty.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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