Your poem reminds me of the way I used to feel from childhood to 2007. After I moved to Michigan and got the proper mental health attention and was put on the correct medication I am doing so much better now. I have been doing pretty good for the past eleven years now. I hope you are able to get the help you need to get through what you are going through mentally.

Your plot interests me, Yes your character was believable, and your dialog flowed naturally.

There is nothing I would change within your poem.

Yes, your poem was memorable!

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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