Your poem was very inspiring and I love your rhyming technique!

the plot of your poem has interested me, yes, your characters were believable, and your dialog flowed naturally.

I liked you first stanza most. There is nothing I disliked about your poem. Your first stanza is what stood out most for me.

There is nothing I would change about your poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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