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 A Sudden Sleep  [E]
An elderly woman died in the front pew in the middle of Mass today.
by Lobelia is truly blessed
Review of A Sudden Sleep  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A very sad poem and I am so sorry for your loss.

The plot of your poem interests me. The characters in your poem were believable. Yes, your dialog in your poem flowed naturally.

What I liked most was the way you expressed your feelings about your loss. There is nothing I like least about your poem. Your feelings are what stood out most for me in this poem.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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