A very inspiring poem. That is great that the youngest of your children would like to be a writer just like you. My mom was a poetry writer and I am a poetry writer hoping to publish a book of my own poetry soon.

Your plot interests me. Your characters are believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally.

Your time, place and other setting characteristics worked together.

What I liked most was that your youngest child decided to be a writer, just like you. There is nothing I liked least about your poem. The youngest of our children
a storyteller, just like you; stood out for me.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

The writing of your poem is memorable Because it is a true story about your youngest child wanting to be a writer just like you.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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