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Dragons in the Garden  [E]
Through the eyes of a child: Magic still exists. A Story-Poem Entry
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am doing the I Write Activity and you posted before me. Long time no see. *Laugh* (Kidding of Course) We have a weekly drink at the Writer's Cafe/Watering Trough, it would seem.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This was an enchanted story-poem about a child and a dragon. Both fill up the lonely places in each other. It brought to mind that great Peter, Paul and Mary song, Puff the Magic Dragon.

Magic still exists if we retain the hearts and minds we had as children and trade them for the adult cunning and too often mean spiritedness that comes with it all. A lot of adults would get a sour puss on about what I just wrote. That is how you tell they have lost the child in them - by their twisted facial expressions and hyper-critical attitude.

I don't think you or I have that problem as we still appreciate music and words that bless our lives.

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What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"He told me of the “in-between” where only children go;
a place where dragons live and magic still exists.
He told me of the wonders there that only children know.
How the clouds are just like slides, full of turns and twists."

Oh to be a kid again and experience anything close to this. This poem manages to be both down-to-earth and rich in introspective insight. That is not an easy balance to achieve. If there were a designated poet for this site, I think you'd be it. The amazing thing about reading is how it takes on a life of its own when it's good. We remember what we read if we are lucid enough to have a rewarding experience, such as this one.

Carry on, my wayward son and all that! *Music2*

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HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you! This is a public review because that is required by I Write in 2018. It is a Simply Positive review in honor of SHERRI GIBSON , who was nothing but kind in all her dealings with me. May her light shine on us all.

Making a Difference One Private or Public Review at a Time in 2018! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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