A very unique and inspiring poem! I like the rhythm of your poem.

Your plot interested me. Your characters are believable. Yes, your dialog flowed naturally for me in your poem.

The time, place and other setting characteristics has worked together for me in your poem.

What I liked most about your poem is "When are you going to be here? How long are you staying? Where are you going? All questions from a mom, with no reservations, about changing my plans.". There was nothing that I liked least about your poem. "Tears flowed with no reservations, or worries about being childish. I am daddy. I am here. I am hugging her tight. She is happy. That is enough." stood out for me in your poem.

There is nothing I would change within the writing of your poem.

Yes, the writing of your poem is memorable because it is based on your story.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle



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