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 | WRITING & LIGHTING  [E] Lifting of the spirit through writing.  |
| (4.5)| Hi!dog pack It's been a pleasure to review your story "WRITING & LIGHTING" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you. I like this poem because it’s full of wonderful thoughts. You have painted a vivid picture through your writings. It is easy to read and understand. Yes, writing is the best way to express our feelings. I learned many from WDC and still I am learning. We can help ourselves by writing. If we put down our good and bad feelings that happened everyday and acknowledge them may help to remove anxiety and lift up our spirit. The words of your poem is so pure, honest and very true. My favorite: Hold your head high You're not dead you're alive write and you'll receive a reply Some suggestions: I think you need to capitalize all the first letters of each lines. Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. It is wonderful.   Mina   ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 05/25/2018 @ 2:48pm EDT