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 | Secrets  [E] Just listen... you’ll find something.  |
| (4.0)| Hello , I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.  First of all,  WELCOME  to WDC If you enjoy writing and reading, you have landed on the right planet...    Why I chose this item: This is a part of August Challenge from Angel Review Forum. Any kind of Secret is interesting... So was this one.  My favorites parts: I loved the suspense. In this little space you have created immense amount of suspense.  Characters: There were not many characters but you have defined the protagonist showing us his character. I don't know if its a he or a she !!!  StoryLine/Plot :The plot was simple but intriguing.  Action/Flow : It flowed smoothly and without hiccups. But I think it would have been better if you had given spaces in between paragraphs.  Ending: You didn't tell us. I mean they told you the secret but you didn't tell me.  I wonder what it was.   Overall impression: Overall it was an impressive piece of writing. Do use double spacing. Its helps the readers' eyes.  A few Typos:None that I noticed. Keep writing... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  Rima...Happy Writing  !!!  A "The WDC Angel Army" Angelilc review... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 08/04/2018 @ 3:58pm EDT