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 Catching Stars  [E]
A young boy who cannot see the shapes of his world finds this new mysterious light
by Bekah Schofield
Review of Catching Stars  
Review by Rima...
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello ,

I enjoyed reading your story.
I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore. *Angelic*


First of all,
*GreetR* WELCOME *GreetL*
to WDC


If you enjoy writing and reading, you have landed on the right planet... *Earth* *BigSmile*

*WaterDrop* Why I chose this item:
This is a part of the Angel Review August Challenge. The name and the tag line was interesting.

*DropY* My favorites parts:
I liked the way you have kept the suspense and overall idea behind the story.

*DropB* Characters:
The description of the boy gave me the impression that he was blind, but then he could see the light in between his fingers, so I guessed he wasn't. I am a bit confused here. He seemed pretty curious and full of life.
The teacher has a unique way of sowing things to the boys. She seemed to be a woman of wonderful character.

*DropO* StoryLine/Plot :
The storyline was simple yet engaging. It had a sweetness to it that gave this piece life.

*DropR* Action/Flow :
The flow was smooth and one could see things through the character's eyes.

*DropV* Ending:
The end was lovely and the question that the reader had in mind was ultimately answered.

*DropG* Overall impression:
Overall i liked reading your piece.

*Drop* A few Typos:
thing the dark: thing in the dark
“Where did it come from! Which one is it!” replace ! with ?

Beautiful piece and well written.

Thanks for sharing.. Keep writing....

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Happy Writing *Quill* !!!
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