Hello!

I found this through the 'Read and Review' button and thought that it was a nice poem with a really positive message. It was inspiring, it was good as self help, and I think the format really worked from a poetic standpoint.

Pieces like this are really good, because having the courage to share personal things like this, people who are trying to emulate similar feelings will also have the courage to say positive things about themselves.

I felt like the qualifier 'actual' for geek came off as a little defensive? You could have used another word like 'awesome' or 'adorable' or 'intelligent' to give off a wide range of stronger messages with that line. But other than that, I thought it was great. These are all great messages, and I hope that you really got something out of writing this. I'm sure that a lot of people will get something positive from reading it.

I know I did.

Thank you for sharing this, and I wish you all the best in working with this, and any other pieces you've got in mind.

Sincerely,




-Cat









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